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A Long, Narrow Mark on a Section of Tree

Log

In other words, a log line.  Or logline.  Either can be used, if the many websites and definitions I looked at are to be trusted.

And no, actually a logline is not a long, narrow mark on a section of tree.

One definition is:  a measuring instrument that consists of a float that trails from a ship by a knotted line in order to measure the ship’s speed through the water.

Another is:  the story in one active sentence, focusing on the concept, main character and main conflict. Ideally in 25 words or less.

The latter is, of course, the kind of logline I’m talking about.  Even after hours of searching the internet I was unable to find the origin of the term.  If anyone knows, please do enlighten me!

ChristianFilmmakers.org is currently having a logline workshop and contest, which I am participating in.  Three talented judges assist the contestants in polishing their loglines, and then when the workshop is over, the loglines will be judged and a winner selected.

Last year, that winner was me.  This year, I’m working on three loglines to enter, carefully crafting them in the hopes of preserving my status as She Who Wins the Logline Contests.

And what are the three loglines?  Here they are, for your reading pleasure.  The first is for a screenplay, the other two for novels.

Title: Umbrella Beach
Genre: Science-fiction/Steampunk
Logline: A lonely orphan escapes his corrupt underwater city and finds a haven on a quiet island, where he discovers the key to exposing the corruption and must find a way to get the evidence to the citizens before the government destroys it.

Title: Chroma
Genre: Science-fiction/Cyberpunk
Logline: In a world where virtual reality is the preferred mode of living, a colorblind photographer finds that he is the only person who can take down a cyber mafia that has perfected a method of killing over the internet.

Title: Radialloy
Genre: Sci-fi
Logline: When her father suffers sudden insanity, a doctor’s daughter grapples with her newfound past, as a mutineer and a pair of imposters try anything and everything to gain a valuable secret embedded in her body.

Stay tuned for a special announcement about Radialloy!

P.S.  My friend Jordan over at Phantom Moose has some wonderful advice about writing loglines.

16 Responses to A Long, Narrow Mark on a Section of Tree

  1. Racheal says:

    Hi, Grace!

    I like the look :) Nice and elegant and clean.

    To me, Radialloy sounds the most intersting…So I’ll stay tuned!

    Racheal

  2. Jordan says:

    Yay, a logline post! Thanks for mentioning me. :-)

    (I told you this on Twitter, but if you read my book that you’re supposed to be test reading, you’ll discover the origin of the term logline.)

  3. Jeremiah aka 'Lycanis' says:

    Those look interesting! I might have to enter that contest…you can enter a logline for a novel? Don’t worry, I won’t be any competition or anything. ;)

    • Grace says:

      Yes, the rules didn’t say anything about if it was for a novel or a screenplay. The contest runs until June first, so hurry up and enter! :D

      • Jeremiah aka 'Lycanis' says:

        I just figured out that I already did that logline…and I don’t really have another story to do it with, so I guess I might not…unless I think one up before June! ;) Anyway, it’s good to know the deadline so I’m not giving up on it yet. :D

  4. Calista/Milly says:

    Wow, I like how your website looks! :D It’s nice and clean (and I don’t have to wade through the thingamabobs that you have to try and reproduce in order to comment. ;) ) and the posts are edifying and/or amusing. :D (So far..I might add a few more lovely categories to that once there’s more than two posts. ;) )

    Great job, Gracie! :D We wants to keep an eye on this place. ^_^

  5. Lee Southworth says:

    Very nice! I love the way it looks. I don’t understand a lot of this but I look forward to learning.

    • Grace says:

      Thank you so much, Grandma! :D I’m really glad you stopped by and commented. Hopefully some of my posts will be less writer-geeky and more general interest. ;)

  6. Corey P. says:

    Hey Grace! I just found your blog via Andrew J., and thought I’d stop by to say hello. :) It’s lookin’ good – very clean and professional-like. Anticipating more posts…

  7. Jordan is the best when it comes to loglines. :D

    I am reminded that I need to work on my loglines for the contest… and that I want to read all these stories of yours. ;)

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